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Old 05-08-2006, 08:52 PM   #1
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Ok so i wrote my paper. It sucks. Im aware of it so copious amounts of flamming are not needed.

I was wondering if u guys could proof read it and correct any horrible mistakes.

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BTW I am trying to advocate the county i live in for a UC system school.

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I graduated with a degree in Poli-Sci (international relations). I'll proof read when I get to work and have access to Word.
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I took a look at it and I am going to sit on it for a few and then read it again and will let you know what i think. You make some good points but i also think some of them are a little weak. When is it due and I apologize if i dont have a response up before tomorrow afternoon.
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I took a look at it and I am going to sit on it for a few and then read it again and will let you know what i think. You make some good points but i also think some of them are a little weak. When is it due and I apologize if i dont have a response up before tomorrow afternoon.
np at all. I realize some arguments are weak. Ill take suggestions.

Its due Wed at 3.30. I know i gotta site my sources a little different. But thats after my workscited/bibliography is done.
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Just as I first started reading it (just read one sentence..) I noticed that you didn't spell out eight. Not sure if your teacher will care or not since it is a Poli Sci paper... just something to look at.

Might want to change some of those"like"s into "such as"s.

So far, nothing about Poli Sci, just grammar that stuck out at me.

Okay, I am guessing this isn't a Poli Sci intro class. After 2-3 pages of reading, I concluded that I probably can not help.

Good luck.
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Just as I first started reading it (just read one sentence..) I noticed that you didn't spell out eight. Not sure if your teacher will care or not since it is a Poli Sci paper... just something to look at.

Might want to change some of those"like"s into "such as"s.

So far, nothing about Poli Sci, just grammar that stuck out at me.

Okay, I am guessing this isn't a Poli Sci intro class. After 2-3 pages of reading, I concluded that I probably can not help.

Good luck.
heh alright. Ill look into that. Thnx.

Not sure why he had me write on that. slightly pertains to government with the process of starting a school, but idk. weird professor
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