Originally Posted by komodo
I chose to revise the two essays in my portfolio not because they were my worst and needed it, but rather because I enjoyed writing then
and wouldn’t mind the extra bonding time. No essay is ever complete. The grammar can be flawless and the diction outstanding, but it can always be rewritten and reorganized to better convey the message, as I tried to do with these two essays.
Sounds good Harry. However, speaking of flawless grammar and all, shouldn't the underlined be them not then?